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Who's That Girl?
Curse 
of a Promise
Chapter: 3
Who's That Girl?
Naruto goes outside, and sees all his friends, which he notices all of them have changed, but this one certain girl catches his eyes. As Naruto walks towards her, Sakura appears out of now where, and blocks Naruto from this one certaingirl that made his body stiff, and made him blush like no other girl has, not even Sakura.
"Hi, Naruto!" Said Sakura as she noticed something was wrong with Naruto.
Naruto did not respond as he was lost in this one girls eyes. They were so beautiful and yet seemed so delicate. Naruto felt as if she was poison because he was not able to move nor speak.
"Uhh... Naruto?" Said Sakura as she looked at Naruto.
"Hey, what the fuck is up with that bastard!? Humph! Ignoring me like that!" Screams the inner Sakura.
As Naruto stands Shino, Kiba, and Akamaru walk towards Naruto as they notice him looking at Kurenai- sensei.
"Drop it Naruto, she's too old for you." Said Kiba as Akamaru agreed with him.
"You have weird taste in women Naruto." Said Shino as he looked at Kurenai- Sensei.
Naruto does not responded as he knows he is not looking at Kurenai- sensei, but a girl more beautiful than he has ever laid eyes on.
Kiba notices there is no response to Naruto, so he gives him a little push and says, "Go talk to her Naruto!"
"Huh?" Said Naruto as he had no idea what has happened.
"Go talk to her!" said Kiba.
Shino just nodded
"Right!" Said Naruto as he looked over and saw her.
"Well?" Said Shino as he saw Naruto stop in his tracks.
"Uhh... Naruto, you have to walk over there." Said Kiba as he pointed him to the right direction.
As Naruto started walking towards her Kiba started yelling, "Yeah, Naruto go get her!" But he noticed that he just passed Kurenai-sensei. "Huh? Where are you going Naruto!" As Naruto continued kiba noticed him walking wright towards Ino and he says, "Make up your mind."
"Um... Hi." Naruto says as he had drool coming out of his mouth.
"Na- Naruto, close you mouth!" Yelled Ino as she was discussed by Naruto's drool.
"Um... Ino?" Asked Naruto.
"Yeah, Naruto?" Said Ino as she smiled.
"Can you get out of the way, so I could go talk to pretty girl..." Said Naruto as he was dazed and confused.
As Ino moves out of the way, she notices Naruto isn't all over Sakura. As Ino turns around she says, "Oh Naruto, you little dog!"
"What's up with Naruto?" Said Sakura to Kiba.
"I don't know..." Said Kiba as he watched.
Sakura's mouth drops as she sees Naruto stop right in front of Hinata. She could not believe her eyes! "Hey, Naruto you are suppose to be paying attention to me not her!" Screams the inner Sakura as she wanted to punch her in the face.
"H- h- h- hi there!" said Naruto as he stuttered.
"Huh?" Said Hinata as she blushed.
"W- w- whats your name?" Said Naruto as he continued stuttering.
As Hinata watches Naruto drool, she wonders why Naruto doesn't remember her, but it's no surprise Naruto never payed any attention to her, but now that she has his attention she doesn't want it.
"Are you alright?" Said Naruto as he watched Hinata.
Hinata couldn’t believe Naruto was talking to her. As Hinata comes to her senses she feels very weird. She had a weird and yet sensational feeling as she watched Naruto.
"Do you have a fever or something?" Asked Naruto as he touched her forehead.
As Naruto touched her forehead, Hinata's eyes open widely, and her face turned pale, she started getting dizzy, after she wasn't able to stand. As she closed her eyes she fell.
"Hey, what's wrong?!" Asked Naruto as he caught her before she hit the ground.
Everyone in the crowd turned around and asked Naruto what he did, but Kurenai- sensei was watching the whole time and said, "It's all right, she just fainted!" Yelled Kurenai- sensei so everyone could hear.
"Um... Kurenai- sensei?" Asked Naruto.
"Yes, Naruto?" Replied Kurenai- sensei.
“Um, who is that?” Asked Naruto.
"Why, that's Hinata Hyuuga... Don't you remember Naruto?" Asked Kurenai- sensei.
"Hi- Hinata... Its been a long time..." Sighs Naruto as he was feeling very down.
Kurenai-sensei puts her hand on Naruto's shoulder and smiles.
As Naruto looks at Hinata, he can't help, but think about how beautiful she has grown to be.
"Hinata?" Said Naruto as he started to blush.
As Hinata opened her eyes she noticed Naruto is holding her, she turned bright red. Naruto continued to look at her, but his beautiful blue eyes turned very gentle and made Hinata very uncomfortable, she felt very well protected, but Naruto never acted so protective towards her. Hinata had a fast reaction and punched Naruto right in the face. He went flying and didn't stop till he hit a tree knocking it down.
"Hinata! Control yourself at once!" Said Kurenai-sensei As she raised her voice.
"Uh... Yes Kurenai-sensei!" Said Hinata as she Bowed
Kurenai-sensei stops Hinata and says" Thats alright, Hinata please don’t do that your not much of a student to me... Anymore!”
"Okay, this has been a pleasant greeting, but we all have a mission, and this has taken plenty of time. Now every one continue with your missions as the Hokage has ordered you to do so!" Yelled Kakashi as he was passing down a message from Lady Tsunade.
Naruto and Hinata have just came back from a mission so they had the whole day to themselves.
"Hey, I'm confused. Why did you say Hinata's not much of a student to you anymore?" Asked Naruto as he felt he was left in the dark.
"Well, that's something Hinata has to answer..." Said Kurenai-sensei as she had to leave for a mission, but stopped and says, "Take good care of Hinata, and have fun!" Then Kurenai-sensei left.
Naruto and Hinata were left alone. He continued to watch Hinata as he sees her eyes sadden in a few seconds later they turn full on hatred. Naruto remembered what he asked, so he was now really worries and he just had to ask, "Hinata?"
Hinata relaxes and her eyes flush out the sorrow and hatred. She smiles and says, "Yes, Naruto?"
of a PromiseChapter: 3
Who's That Girl?
Naruto goes outside, and sees all his friends, which he notices all of them have changed, but this one certain girl catches his eyes. As Naruto walks towards her, Sakura appears out of now where, and blocks Naruto from this one certain
girl that made his body stiff, and made him blush like no other girl has, not even Sakura."Hi, Naruto!" Said Sakura as she noticed something was wrong with Naruto.
Naruto did not respond as he was lost in this one girls eyes. They were so beautiful and yet seemed so delicate. Naruto felt as if she was poison because he was not able to move nor speak.
"Uhh... Naruto?" Said Sakura as she looked at Naruto.
"Hey, what the fuck is up with that bastard!? Humph! Ignoring me like that!" Screams the inner Sakura.
As Naruto stands Shino, Kiba, and Akamaru walk towards Naruto as they notice him looking at Kurenai- sensei.
"Drop it Naruto, she's too old for you." Said Kiba as Akamaru agreed with him.
"You have weird taste in women Naruto." Said Shino as he looked at Kurenai- Sensei.
Naruto does not responded as he knows he is not looking at Kurenai- sensei, but a girl more beautiful than he has ever laid eyes on.
Kiba notices there is no response to Naruto, so he gives him a little push and says, "Go talk to her Naruto!"
"Huh?" Said Naruto as he had no idea what has happened.
"Go talk to her!" said Kiba.
Shino just nodded
"Right!" Said Naruto as he looked over and saw her.
"Well?" Said Shino as he saw Naruto stop in his tracks.
"Uhh... Naruto, you have to walk over there." Said Kiba as he pointed him to the right direction.
As Naruto started walking towards her Kiba started yelling, "Yeah, Naruto go get her!" But he noticed that he just passed Kurenai-sensei. "Huh? Where are you going Naruto!" As Naruto continued kiba noticed him walking wright towards Ino and he says, "Make up your mind."
"Um... Hi." Naruto says as he had drool coming out of his mouth.
"Na- Naruto, close you mouth!" Yelled Ino as she was discussed by Naruto's drool.
"Um... Ino?" Asked Naruto.
"Yeah, Naruto?" Said Ino as she smiled.
"Can you get out of the way, so I could go talk to pretty girl..." Said Naruto as he was dazed and confused.
As Ino moves out of the way, she notices Naruto isn't all over Sakura. As Ino turns around she says, "Oh Naruto, you little dog!"
"What's up with Naruto?" Said Sakura to Kiba.
"I don't know..." Said Kiba as he watched.
Sakura's mouth drops as she sees Naruto stop right in front of Hinata. She could not believe her eyes! "Hey, Naruto you are suppose to be paying attention to me not her!" Screams the inner Sakura as she wanted to punch her in the face.
"H- h- h- hi there!" said Naruto as he stuttered.
"Huh?" Said Hinata as she blushed.
"W- w- whats your name?" Said Naruto as he continued stuttering.
As Hinata watches Naruto drool, she wonders why Naruto doesn't remember her, but it's no surprise Naruto never payed any attention to her, but now that she has his attention she doesn't want it.
"Are you alright?" Said Naruto as he watched Hinata.
Hinata couldn’t believe Naruto was talking to her. As Hinata comes to her senses she feels very weird. She had a weird and yet sensational feeling as she watched Naruto.
"Do you have a fever or something?" Asked Naruto as he touched her forehead.
As Naruto touched her forehead, Hinata's eyes open widely, and her face turned pale, she started getting diz
zy, after she wasn't able to stand. As she closed her eyes she fell."Hey, what's wro
ng?!" Asked Naruto as he caught her before she hit the ground.Everyone in the crowd turned around and asked Naruto what he did, but Kurenai- sensei was watching the whole time and said, "It's all right, she just fainted!" Yelled Kurenai- sensei so everyone could hear.
"Um... Kurenai- sensei?" Asked Naruto.
"Yes, Naruto?" Replied Kurenai- sensei.
“Um, who is that?” Asked Naruto.
"Why, that's Hinata Hyuuga... Don't you remember Naruto?" Asked Kurenai- sensei.
"Hi- Hinata... Its been a long time..." Sighs Naruto as he was feeling very down.
Kurenai-sensei puts her hand on Naruto's shoulder and smiles.
As Naruto looks at Hinata, he can't help, but think about how beautiful she has grown to be.
"Hinata?" Said Naruto as he started to blush.
As Hinata opened her eyes she noticed Naruto is holding her, she turned bright red. Naruto continued to look at her, but his beautiful blue eyes turned very gentle and made Hinata very uncomfortable, she felt very well protected, but Naruto never acted so protective towards her. Hinata had a fast reaction and punched Naruto right in the face. He went flying and didn't stop till he hit a tree knocking it down.
"Hinata! Control yourself at once!" Said Kurenai-sensei As she raised her voice.
"Uh... Yes Kurenai-sensei!" Said Hinata as she Bowed
Kurenai-sensei stops Hinata and says" Thats alright, Hinata please don’t do that your not much of a student to me... Anymore!”
"Okay, this has been a pleasant greeting, but we all have a mission, and this has taken plenty of time. Now every one continue with your missions as the Hokage has ordered you to do so!" Yelled Kakashi as he was passing down a message from Lady Tsunade.
Naruto and Hinata have just came back from a mission so they had the whole day to themselves.
"Hey, I'm confused. Why did you say Hinata's not much of a student to you anymore?" Asked Naruto as he felt he was left in the dark.
"Well, that's something Hinata has to answer..." Said Kurenai-sensei as she had to leave for a mission, but stopped and says, "Take good care of Hinata, and have fun!" Then Kurenai-sensei left.
Naruto and Hinata were left alone. He continued to watch Hinata as he sees her eyes sadden in a few seconds later they turn full on hatred. Naruto remembered what he asked, so he was now really worries and he just had to ask, "Hinata?"
Hinata relaxes and her eyes flush out the sorrow and hatred. She smiles and says, "Yes, Naruto?"
TO BE CONTINUED...
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