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Hinata's Pain...
Curse of a PromiseChapter: 4
Hinata's Pain. . .
Naruto and Hinata were left alone he continued to watch Hinata, as he sees her eyes sadden and in a few seconds later her eyes turn full of hatred. Naruto remembered what he asked her, so he was now really curies and just had to ask, "Hinata!?"Hinata relaxed and her eyes flushed out the sorrow and hatred. She smiles and says, "Yes, Naruto?"
"Well, I was just wondering..."
"What Kurenai meant when she said I wasn't her student anymore." Said Hinata as she interrupted Naruto.
"Yeah!" Says Naruto with a big smile.
Naruto and Hinata take a walk around the woods, but something is wrong, Hinata has changed a lot and she's not her shy self anymore, she seems more like she has a lot of pain and has been suffering for a while, Naruto can't stand take it so he wants to know what keeps bothering her. Naruto stands in front of Hinata asking, "Hinata! I want to know what is causing you so much pain!"
Hinata's arms start shaking as she balls her hands into fists, then her whole body starts to shake as well.
"Hi-Hinata?" Asked Naruto.
'I'm no longer part of the main branch family..." Said Hinata, ashamed of what has happened.
"What!?" Shouts Naruto in complete shock.
"That's' right Naruto, I have been cast away as if I was an animal...! Cast into the dark night... Left behind to be forgotten!" Yelled Hinata as tears started.
Naruto was left speechles
s. "It's is all because of Han
abi!" Screamed Hinata."Hanabi? Isn't that your younger sister?" Asked Naruto.
"Hanabi... That reached brat! She is my younger sister. It's all because of her, it's all her fault!" Screamed Hinata in range.
"What did she do?" Asked Naruto in a soft tone of voice.
Hinata has a painful flashback.
"Hinata, get out!" Screamed Hiashi.
"B-but father!" Yelled Hinata in shock.
"Don't raise your voice at me! Now get out! You are no longer worth teaching...! Hanabi is younger, and I have put her through intense training, and was able to finish it! You couldn't even get through it! Scream Hiashi in an intense voice and gasped for air.
"I could do better!" said Hinata as she raised her voice.
"Enough! I will not allow you to bring shame to this family any..."
"No!" Screams Hinata as she interrupts her father.
"You little ingrate! Don't you dare speak over me! Now, leave you disgraceful child!" Screamed Hiashi.
Hanabi woke up and peeked outside her bedroom door to see what all the commotion was about.
"I can do better, Father..." Said Hinata, as she started to tear up in sadness.
"Hinata..? Hinata...?" Said a voice.
Hinata came back to her senses and noticed she was crying.
"Hinata...? Are you okay? You zoned out a little." Said
Naruto as he placed his hand on Hinata's shoulder. As Hinata sighs she says, "Hanabi... Hanabi was able to surpass me in power and was able learn one of our most secret ninjutsu, Gental Fists. Hanabi was able to advance even further while I was still Byakugan... My Father was disgraced and angry that I was not able to surpass him in strength, power, and agility. He was tired of my... Failure! " Screamed Hinata as she punched Naruto in the face.
"Ahhh!" Screamed Naruto as he flew and hit many trees on his way down.
"Na-Naruto, I-I'm really sorry!" Said Hinata as she ran over to him.
"Wow, Hinata you look really pretty when you blush." Said Naruto as he also started to blush.
WILL BE CONTINUED....
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| lex61598 | =^-^= | 0 | Jan 31 2009, 6:09 PM EST by lex61598 | ||
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yes, i'm a boy and i put blushes on my smilies, dwi
daomn!!! i can't wait till you post the next chapter! awesome story! |
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| taurus29 | ;__; | 0 | Jan 29 2009, 5:19 PM EST by taurus29 | ||
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no more? ... cliffhangers are so mean >.<
can't wait till you add more =) |
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| Liztornar | Awww | 0 | Jan 28 2009, 8:31 PM EST by Liztornar | ||
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Looks like it ends here. . . ;9
Hehe, noo. I stopped her because I wanted to know if anyone likes it. . . If not why bother and make more chapters? lol Well, I hope I get a lot of replies back. Miss you all. . . bye. comment. .. I love them |
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