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Fanfic Part 35
‘Fuck! This is it! The fourth tail!’ Yamato got rid of Kabuto by knocking him out. “Sakura! Sai! Keep an eye on Kabuto!” he sped up to Naruto and Orochimaru. Naruto took on the form of the Kyuubi with four tails, now he was building up an attack toward Orochimaru.
“… that … can’t be good,” Orochimaru stared, but got out of the way soon enough. The blast of chakra headed for Orochimaru, but he dodged. The chakra collided with the ground and smoke went up in the air. Yamato stopped before it.
“Goddamn it Naruto!”
“Wind Dragon Summoning!” Tatski came from behind and she swooped over Yamato.
“What the-?”
The Wind Dragon easily got rid of all the smoke. She jumped down and launched at Naruto. She threw him to the ground, grabbed his arms and laid on his back.
“Kyuubi! You better let Naruto come out!”
Tatski felt shivers, something seeped into her, ‘Why?’ Kyuubi asked, ‘he asked for this power.’
‘He’s not even freaking conscience! I swear, if you-’
‘What? What are you going to do if I don’t release the boy? Hmm?’
‘Kyuubi! You…’
‘… what’s that?’
‘Someone else … I can feel the aura, but I don’t know who it belongs to.’
‘Either way, he’ll pay.’
Tatski rolled off Naruto, her arms were burnt, but they already began healing, she kept heaving. ‘Kyuubi’s … chakra went right to my skin … if it wasn’t for Ame’s healing abilities, I’d be dead.’
“Jinchuuriki!” yelled out Yamato, Tatski looked up at him, then at Naruto. Naruto was on the ground still squirming badly.
‘What the hell is he doing?!’ She crawled over to Naruto and noticed a dim green glow. ‘Tsunade’s necklace? … Kyuubi?’ She grabbed Naruto’s hand, and right away the chakra stung her. ‘Kyuubi?’
‘That fucking bastard! It’s pushing me back behind the gates!’
‘… what? … you mean controlling you?’
‘Yes!’
Tatski hand was already bleeding by the time she let go, she needed one more question answered though; she grabbed Naruto’s hand once more, ‘Is this harming Naruto in any way?’
‘Well … it can’t be good … for him,’ Kyuubi roared, Tatski let go of Naruto’s hand again; she got to her feet.
“Okay, time for second-third!” She rejuvenated with more chakra. She quickly built it then attacked Yamato. He crashed against a boulder, but he wasn’t knocked out. Tatski turned back to Naruto, he was already out cold. She turned to Yamato, “you bloody bastard!” She launched again then kicked him across the face, then she kicked his abdomen with her other foot. “You were hurting Naruto!" She formed a blade of chakra and attacked, but he dodged. He grabbed her arm then locked her with chakra manacles against a tree.
‘What the hell is this girl!?’ he looked bewilderingly at her.
“If … you think … that a trick this stupid and naive will work on me … you are sadly mistaken!” Purple chakra burst and it blew Yamato back. He slid across the ground, but stayed on his feet.
‘Purple chakra!’ she launched, but right before punching him, she stopped centimeters away from him. She turned her head.
“… Na … Naruto?” A bunshin appeared by Naruto, then the Tatski in front of Yamato went up in smoke.
“… there’s … there’s no way!”
“… that … can’t be good,” Orochimaru stared, but got out of the way soon enough. The blast of chakra headed for Orochimaru, but he dodged. The chakra collided with the ground and smoke went up in the air. Yamato stopped before it.
“Goddamn it Naruto!”
“Wind Dragon Summoning!” Tatski came from behind and she swooped over Yamato.
“What the-?”
The Wind Dragon easily got rid of all the smoke. She jumped down and launched at Naruto. She threw him to the ground, grabbed his arms and laid on his back.
“Kyuubi! You better let Naruto come out!”
Tatski felt shivers, something seeped into her, ‘Why?’ Kyuubi asked, ‘he asked for this power.’
‘He’s not even freaking conscience! I swear, if you-’
‘What? What are you going to do if I don’t release the boy? Hmm?’
‘Kyuubi! You…’
‘… what’s that?’
‘Someone else … I can feel the aura, but I don’t know who it belongs to.’
‘Either way, he’ll pay.’
Tatski rolled off Naruto, her arms were burnt, but they already began healing, she kept heaving. ‘Kyuubi’s … chakra went right to my skin … if it wasn’t for Ame’s healing abilities, I’d be dead.’
“Jinchuuriki!” yelled out Yamato, Tatski looked up at him, then at Naruto. Naruto was on the ground still squirming badly.
‘What the hell is he doing?!’ She crawled over to Naruto and noticed a dim green glow. ‘Tsunade’s necklace? … Kyuubi?’ She grabbed Naruto’s hand, and right away the chakra stung her. ‘Kyuubi?’
‘That fucking bastard! It’s pushing me back behind the gates!’
‘… what? … you mean controlling you?’
‘Yes!’
Tatski hand was already bleeding by the time she let go, she needed one more question answered though; she grabbed Naruto’s hand once more, ‘Is this harming Naruto in any way?’
‘Well … it can’t be good … for him,’ Kyuubi roared, Tatski let go of Naruto’s hand again; she got to her feet.
“Okay, time for second-third!” She rejuvenated with more chakra. She quickly built it then attacked Yamato. He crashed against a boulder, but he wasn’t knocked out. Tatski turned back to Naruto, he was already out cold. She turned to Yamato, “you bloody bastard!” She launched again then kicked him across the face, then she kicked his abdomen with her other foot. “You were hurting Naruto!" She formed a blade of chakra and attacked, but he dodged. He grabbed her arm then locked her with chakra manacles against a tree.
‘What the hell is this girl!?’ he looked bewilderingly at her.
“If … you think … that a trick this stupid and naive will work on me … you are sadly mistaken!” Purple chakra burst and it blew Yamato back. He slid across the ground, but stayed on his feet.
‘Purple chakra!’ she launched, but right before punching him, she stopped centimeters away from him. She turned her head.
“… Na … Naruto?” A bunshin appeared by Naruto, then the Tatski in front of Yamato went up in smoke.
“… there’s … there’s no way!”
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| atp_65 | sweet =) | 0 | Feb 22 2009, 12:39 PM EST by atp_65 | ||
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that showed up that stupid yamato
and ditto to blueoctober, the turning on yamato was a good twist =) |
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| miyazaki68 | heheh | 0 | Aug 8 2008, 11:01 PM EDT by miyazaki68 | ||
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sweet!! that'll show yamato-sensei!! xD
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| blueoctober | daomn | 0 | Aug 7 2008, 11:10 PM EDT by blueoctober | ||
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ditto to myself on the older comment, cool fighting scene :D
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